It all happens in the state of your mind,
when all things seem unclear
To rise up, stand and glorify
its how we falter , how we fear
You move a step foward
unable to walk on
you look back again
hesistant and torn
Between these two worlds
you are right in between
Within these close walls
you don't hear a thing.
Sometimes, all we need is some drastic change.
4 comments:
HI YO! I was wondering if this is a poem. Hah! it's a original piece from you? Since crit is over and i had so many good nights of sleep, i shall type something here and there!
Hah! for my case, I'm always quite hesitant for a change even though I've already convinced myself that changing is good! (verbally) say is so easy!
But it's cool though! never say die! Stand up after falling!
haha hello, finally someone commented on my blog after quite some time!
yup i just composed it in a state of dilemma.
do give feedbacks if any:]
woah i wanna have many good nights of sleep too:/
and yes keep changing, and only for the better.
Thanks for assuring me i can rise up after falling again.
hahahaha! it's cheap for me to talk like that la.. sometimes it's really hard to think or accept that we can always stand up after falling! Cos I myself is so timid of trying new things... hah.. but... lets try harder together anyway!
yep agreed, we can say it so easily but we ourselves are afraid of it so.
oh well, thats life !
Thanks anyway, yep we shall conquer.
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